Clean Asia, the fanfictional sequel

[johtoken]

--- ORIGINAL CLEAN ASIA PLOT ---
The eyes of mankind has decided to leave their hosts and take over the earth. Their first move was to escape to the moon, where they developed their hostile weapon technology. Ten years later they return and forcefully take over some prominent countries in Asia. Thailand and New Korea has both succumb to the hostile threat, while China insists on dealing with the eyes themselves and refuses any helping hands from around the world.

America sends a pair of pilot twins with extroardinary sixth senses to battle against the evil eyes. They both have designed their own space ships that seems to be about the only thing in existance that can be used to battle these terrible fiends.

--- FANFICTION MODE ---
The Dole twins battled and they triumphed. Though a disastrous challenge, the twins were able to make the world safe to live in from the Eyes.

Six years have passed since then. One minute, shining stars sparkle around the moon. The next minute, it seemed as Earth was already on its way towards destruction.

"Traitors like yourselves would do no good in this chaotic world, and so our quarrel against humanity will continue so long as this scum persists. Your eyes turn against humanity one too many times, and your repeat offenses call for action. The war has just begun...."

The Eyes of Mankind have forced Thailand and New Korea to succumb to their forces once again, though they've doubled their offenses since their last invasion. China, even with the doubled forces, was still able to fight this onslaught...by building double to fight against them. Their isolationist ideals still apply even as of A.D. 54846.

However, Thailand, New Korea, and China are not the only victims this time. Satellites have detected that the Eyes have forced India and Vietnam to surrender to the Eyes, and an impenetrable force binds with Japan as the country goes from utopia to ruin within hours.

Mickey and Mackey Dole, knowing through their sixth senses that this would occur someday, spend their 6 years not resting, but instead vigorously designing their new ships so that they could face this onslaught. The Attractor and Reflector ships are now more powerful than their previous incarnations, and they both head off towards Asia to face the all-powerful onslaught of the Eyes once again.

--- FAN-TIMELINE ---
A.D. 54820 - Mickey and Mackey Dole born.
A.D. 54830 - Eyes of Mankind leave Earth for the moon to develop weapons of destruction.
A.D. 54840 - Eyes of Mankind return to Earth and successfully take over Thailand and New Korea, though China retaliates with their own defenses. Mickey and Mackey Dole go to Asia, fight the Eyes, and triumph. Mickey and Mackey begin designing for Attractor Mk.II and Reflector Mk.II as they arrive back to the US.
A.D. 54846 - Eyes of Mankind return to Earth once again with double the offenses. They managed to successfully take over not only Thailand and New Korea again, but they also take over India and Vietnam and lay ruin to Japan behind a barrier. China doubles their defenses to equalize their opponent.

[cactus]

Hahaha, that's a pretty fun read. Actually, there might be a sequel, but it'll probably be a while before that happens.

The results of the poll would be interesting to see, though.

[wired22]

Harder to interpertate into something else. Like, for the original I thought of the eyes of the world as being the public -media- that looked to the moon as the sapceships took off. Then when it came back down wars seem to break out.

[johtoken]

Sept 17, 2008 22:42:14 GMT -5 wired22 said:

Harder to interpertate into something else. Like, for the original I thought of the eyes of the world as being the public -media- that looked to the moon as the sapceships took off. Then when it came back down wars seem to break out.

By the wars, you mean the original return of the eyes from the original plotline or their re-return on my fanfictional continuation?

[wired22]

Sept 17, 2008 23:10:16 GMT -5 johtoken said:

Sept 17, 2008 22:42:14 GMT -5 wired22 said:

Harder to interpret into something else. Like, for the original I thought of the eyes of the world as being the public -media- that looked to the moon as the sapceships took off. Then when it came back down wars seem to break out.

By the wars, you mean the original return of the eyes from the original plotline or their re-return on my fanfictional continuation?

no like in real life interprertation.